Direct and indirect narration
Narration means reporting what someone said, either in their exact words (direct speech) or in your own words (indirect speech). This unit gives every rule for the change: the reporting verb chosen by tone, the linking word, the back-shift of tenses and modals, the SON rule for pronouns, and the words of time and place, then applies them to every sentence type and to full conversations. Narration is HSSC-I framework content that FBISE says may also be included in HSSC-II Section C, and it is the fixed Q.5 (c) conversation (5 marks) on the old-syllabus paper still set in 2026.
Learning outcomes (5)
- Identify the parts of direct speech (reporting verb, reported speech, inverted commas) and punctuate direct speech correctly.
- Change tense in indirect/direct speech (present, past and perfect tenses, future, modals, time and questions, orders, requests, suggestions and advice) in narrative paragraphs (SLO E-11-C5-04).
- Choose reporting verbs that show the tone of the speech and join the parts with the correct linking word.
- Change pronouns and words of time and place correctly.
- Convert assertive, interrogative, imperative, exclamatory, optative, Let and mixed sentences, and whole conversations, into indirect speech, and indirect speech back into direct speech.
What narration isOften examined
When you tell someone what another person said, you can do it in two ways. You can repeat the exact words inside inverted commas, or you can report the meaning in your own sentence. The first way is direct speech; the second is indirect speech (also called reported speech). Changing one form into the other is called narration.
- Narration
- Reporting the words of a speaker, either in direct or in indirect form.
- Direct speech
- The speaker's exact words, placed inside inverted commas: Ali said, "I am hungry."
- Indirect speech (reported speech)
- The speaker's meaning reported in the reporter's own words, without inverted commas: Ali said that he was hungry.
| Feature | Direct speech | Indirect speech |
|---|---|---|
| Words | The exact words of the speaker | The meaning of the words, reported by someone else |
| Inverted commas | Used: "I am hungry." | Not used |
| Comma after reporting verb | Yes: Ali said, | No comma; a linking word instead: Ali said that |
| Tense of reported speech | As the speaker spoke it | Usually moved one step back (am becomes was) |
| Pronouns | From the speaker's point of view (I, you) | From the reporter's point of view (he, she, they) |
| Time and place words | now, today, here | then, that day, there |
| Question mark and exclamation mark | Kept | Removed; the sentence ends with a full stop |
Indirect: Sana told me that she was going to the Faisal Mosque that day.
- said to became told (a listener, me, is named).
- The linking word that joins the two parts.
- I became she (Sana is the speaker), am going became was going, today became that day.
Parts of direct speech and its punctuationOften examined
Every sentence in direct speech has two parts: the part that tells us who spoke (the reporting part) and the part that gives the exact words (the reported part). Inverted commas mark where the exact words begin and end.
- Reporting verb
- The verb that introduces the speech: said, said to, asked, replied. In indirect speech it is changed to suit the tone.
- Reporting clause
- The speaker plus the reporting verb, and the listener if one is named: "Sana said to her mother".
- Reported speech
- The exact words of the speaker, written inside the inverted commas.
- Inverted commas (quotation marks)
- The marks " " (or ' ') that enclose the reported speech in direct form.
- Speaker (subject of the reporting verb)
- The person who speaks: Sana.
- Listener (object of the reporting verb)
- The person spoken to: her mother. It is not always named.
| Part | Words in the sentence |
|---|---|
| Speaker (subject) | Sana |
| Reporting verb | said to |
| Listener (object) | her mother |
| Inverted commas | " at the start and " at the end of the spoken words |
| Reported speech | I will bake a cake for Eid. |
Punctuation of direct speech
| Rule | Correct example |
|---|---|
| Put a comma after the reporting verb when the reporting clause comes first. | Hamza said, "The match starts at two." |
| Begin the reported speech with a capital letter. | She said, "We are late." |
| The end mark of the speech (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark) goes inside the closing inverted commas. | He asked, "Where is my bat?" |
| When the reporting clause comes after the speech, end a statement with a comma, not a full stop, inside the inverted commas. | "I am ready," said Asma. |
| A question or an exclamation keeps its own mark even when the reporting clause follows; the reporting clause then starts with a small letter. | "Are you ready?" asked the coach. |
| When the reporting clause splits one sentence, use commas on both sides and continue with a small letter. | "If you work hard," said the teacher, "you will pass." |
| When the reporting clause comes between two separate sentences, put a full stop after the reporting clause and start the second sentence with a capital letter. | "I am tired," said Ali. "Let us rest." |
| Begin a new paragraph (a new line) each time the speaker changes. | "Is it raining?" asked Nida. (new line) "Yes, heavily," replied Omar. |
| A quotation inside a speech takes single inverted commas if the outer ones are double. | The teacher said, "Who wrote 'Lab pe aati hai dua'?" |
| Separate a name or title of the listener (vocative) with commas. | "Sir, may I come in?" asked Bilal. |
"Where are you going?" asked the mother. "I am going to the library," replied Saad.
- Each speech is inside inverted commas and begins with a capital letter.
- The question keeps its question mark inside the inverted commas; asked follows with a small letter.
- The statement ends with a comma inside the inverted commas because replied Saad follows it.
- A new speaker starts a new sentence (in a story, a new line).
The method: five changes in every sentenceOften examined
Every conversion from direct to indirect speech is made by the same five checks. Learn them in this order and apply them to every sentence, even in a long conversation.
- Reporting verb: decide the type of sentence (statement, question, order, exclamation, wish) and choose a verb that shows its tone: told, asked, ordered, exclaimed, prayed. Remove the comma and the inverted commas.
- Linking word: join the two parts with that (statements, exclamations, wishes), if or whether (yes/no questions), the question word (wh- questions), or to / not to (orders and requests).
- Pronouns: change them by the SON rule (first person follows the Subject of the reporting verb, second person follows the Object, third person does Not change).
- Tense: if the reporting verb is in the past (said, asked), move every verb in the reported speech one step back (is to was, has to had, will to would, can to could). Keep the tense for universal truths and the other exceptions.
- Time, place and punctuation: change words of nearness (now, today, here, this) to words of distance (then, that day, there, that). End with a full stop; drop question marks, exclamation marks and interjections.
Indirect: Hamid told me that he had bought that bat there the day before.
- Reporting verb: said to became told (a statement with a listener).
- Linking word: that.
- Pronoun: I became he (Hamid is the subject of the reporting verb).
- Tense: bought (past simple) became had bought (past perfect).
- Words: this became that, here became there, yesterday became the day before.
Changing the reporting verbOften examined
The reporting verb is the first thing you change. Two rules are fixed; the rest depend on the tone of the speech, that is, the feeling or purpose behind the words.
| Direct | Indirect | Example |
|---|---|---|
| said (no listener) | said | He said, "I am ill." : He said that he was ill. |
| said to (listener named) + statement | told + listener | He said to me, "I am ill." : He told me that he was ill. |
| said / said to + question | asked, enquired | He said to me, "Are you ill?" : He asked me if I was ill. |
| said / said to + order or request | ordered, requested, advised, begged, forbade | He said to me, "Sit down." : He ordered me to sit down. |
| said + exclamation | exclaimed with joy / sorrow / surprise | He said, "Alas! I am ruined." : He exclaimed with sorrow that he was ruined. |
| said + wish or prayer | wished, prayed | She said, "May you live long!" : She prayed that I might live long. |
| says, will say, has said (not past) | no change in the verb or the tense | He says, "I am ill." : He says that he is ill. |
Forty reporting verbs by tone
Choose the verb that shows the purpose of the speech. The pattern column shows what must follow the verb; a wrong pattern (for example "suggested him to go") is marked as an error.
| No. | Verb | Use it for | Pattern | Example |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | said | a plain statement, no listener named | said (that) + clause | He said that he was busy. |
| 2 | told | a statement to a named listener (said to becomes told) | told + listener + that | He told me that he was busy. |
| 3 | replied | an answer to a question | replied that | She replied that she had finished. |
| 4 | answered | an answer, often short | answered that / answered in the affirmative | He answered in the negative. |
| 5 | informed | giving news or facts | informed + listener + that | The principal informed us that the school would close early. |
| 6 | assured | removing someone's worry | assured + listener + that | He assured his mother that he would come home early. |
| 7 | promised | an undertaking for the future | promised (+ listener) that / promised to | She promised to return the book the next day. |
| 8 | agreed | accepting an idea or proposal | agreed that / agreed to | Omar agreed to join the team. |
| 9 | admitted | accepting a fault or a fact | admitted that / admitted + -ing | The boy admitted that he had broken the window. |
| 10 | denied | saying that something is not true | denied that / denied + -ing | He denied that he had taken the money. |
| 11 | complained | expressing a grievance or annoyance | complained (to + listener) that | Nasir complained that Munir had not attended his party. |
| 12 | apologized | saying sorry | apologized (to + listener) for + -ing / apologized, saying that | He apologized to me for coming late. |
| 13 | warned | pointing out a danger | warned + listener + (not) to / that | The guard warned us not to go near the edge. |
| 14 | reminded | helping someone remember | reminded + listener + to / that | Mother reminded me to take my lunch. |
| 15 | boasted | speaking with pride about oneself | boasted that | He boasted that he was the best bowler in the class. |
| 16 | declared | a firm or public statement | declared that | The umpire declared that the batsman was out. |
| 17 | confessed | admitting guilt or a secret | confessed that | The thief confessed that he had stolen the watch. |
| 18 | threatened | a threat | threatened to / threatened that | The landlord threatened to call the police. |
| 19 | insisted | saying something firmly again | insisted that / insisted on + -ing | She insisted that she had paid the bill. |
| 20 | explained | giving a reason | explained that | He explained that the bus had broken down. |
| 21 | asked | any question | asked (+ listener) if / whether / wh-word | She asked me where I lived. |
| 22 | enquired | a polite or formal question | enquired (of + listener) if / wh-word | Munir enquired how the program had been. |
| 23 | wondered | a question to oneself | wondered if / wh-word | He wondered whether the shop was open. |
| 24 | wanted to know | a question (informal) | wanted to know if / wh-word | The clerk wanted to know when I had applied. |
| 25 | ordered | a command from a person in authority | ordered + listener + (not) to | The officer ordered the soldiers to march. |
| 26 | commanded | a strong, formal order | commanded + listener + to | The general commanded the troops to advance. |
| 27 | requested | a polite request (please, kindly) | requested + listener + to | He requested the waiter to bring the bill. |
| 28 | begged | a humble, desperate request | begged + listener + to | The beggar begged the man to give him some food. |
| 29 | advised | advice (should, had better, orders from an elder for one's good) | advised + listener + (not) to | The doctor advised him to take rest. |
| 30 | urged | strong encouragement | urged + listener + to | The coach urged the players to stay calm. |
| 31 | forbade | a prohibition (Do not ...) | forbade + listener + to | The teacher forbade us to use mobile phones. |
| 32 | suggested | a suggestion (Let us, Why don't we) | suggested that ... should / suggested + -ing | Ali suggested that they should go for a walk. |
| 33 | proposed | a proposal (Let us ...) | proposed (to + listener) that ... should | She proposed that they should start at once. |
| 34 | offered | offering help or a thing (Let me ..., Shall I ...) | offered to + verb | Nasir offered to show him the photographs. |
| 35 | invited | an invitation | invited + listener + to | Hina invited us to her wedding. |
| 36 | refused | saying no to doing something | refused to | He refused to sign the paper. |
| 37 | exclaimed | strong feeling: joy, sorrow, surprise, wonder | exclaimed with joy / sorrow / surprise that | The boys exclaimed with joy that they had won. |
| 38 | thanked | gratitude (Thank you) | thanked + listener (for + noun / -ing) | She thanked me for my help. |
| 39 | congratulated | congratulations | congratulated + listener + on | The principal congratulated Ayesha on her success. |
| 40 | wished / prayed | a wish or a prayer (May ...!) | wished that / prayed that ... might | Mother prayed that I might pass with distinction. |
Linking words (conjunctions)Often examined
In indirect speech the inverted commas are removed, so a word is needed to join the reporting clause and the reported speech. The type of sentence decides the linking word.
| Sentence type | Linking word | Example (indirect) |
|---|---|---|
| Assertive (statement) | that | She said that she was tired. |
| Interrogative, yes/no question (starts with a helping verb: is, do, can, have, will) | if or whether | He asked me if I was ready. |
| Interrogative, wh- question (who, what, when, where, why, how, which, whose) | the wh-word itself (no that, no if) | He asked me where I was going. |
| Imperative, positive (order, request, advice) | to + first form of the verb | The teacher told us to sit down. |
| Imperative, negative (Do not ...) | not to + first form of the verb | Mother told me not to go out. |
| Exclamatory | that | He exclaimed with joy that he had won. |
| Optative (wish or prayer) | that | She prayed that I might succeed. |
| Let (proposal) | that ... should | He proposed that they should leave. |
| Let (permission, Let me / Let him) | to let / to allow | He requested me to let him go. |
Changing the tense (back-shift)Often examined
When the reporting verb is in the past tense (said, told, asked), the words were spoken in the past. So the verbs of the reported speech move one step back into the past. This is called back-shift.
| Tense in direct speech | Becomes | Direct | Indirect (He said that ...) |
|---|---|---|---|
| Present simple | Past simple | "I play cricket." | he played cricket. |
| Present continuous | Past continuous | "I am playing cricket." | he was playing cricket. |
| Present perfect | Past perfect | "I have played cricket." | he had played cricket. |
| Present perfect continuous | Past perfect continuous | "I have been playing cricket." | he had been playing cricket. |
| Past simple | Past perfect | "I played cricket." | he had played cricket. |
| Past continuous | Past perfect continuous | "I was playing cricket." | he had been playing cricket. |
| Past perfect | No change | "I had played cricket." | he had played cricket. |
| Past perfect continuous | No change | "I had been playing cricket." | he had been playing cricket. |
| Future simple (will / shall) | would | "I will play cricket." | he would play cricket. |
| Future continuous | would be + -ing | "I will be playing cricket." | he would be playing cricket. |
| Future perfect | would have + third form | "I will have played cricket." | he would have played cricket. |
| Future perfect continuous | would have been + -ing | "I will have been playing cricket." | he would have been playing cricket. |
Modal verbs
| Direct | Indirect | Example |
|---|---|---|
| will | would | He said, "I will help you." : He said that he would help me. |
| shall (future, first person) | would | I said, "I shall be late." : I said that I would be late. |
| shall (question asking advice or offering: Shall I ...?) | should | He said, "Shall I open the door?" : He asked whether he should open the door. |
| can | could | She said, "I can swim." : She said that she could swim. |
| may (possibility or permission) | might | He said, "It may rain." : He said that it might rain. |
| must (obligation, necessity) | had to | He said, "I must leave now." : He said that he had to leave then. |
| must (a fixed rule, a sure guess, or a lasting duty) | must (no change) | He said, "You must be tired." : He said that I must be tired. |
| must not (prohibition) | must not / was not to | He said, "You must not smoke." : He said that I must not smoke. |
| has to / have to | had to | She said, "I have to go." : She said that she had to go. |
| need (necessity) | needed / had to | He said, "I need a pen." : He said that he needed a pen. |
| could, would, should, might, ought to, used to, had better | No change | He said, "You should work hard." : He said that I should work hard. |
Indirect: The captain said that they had practised hard and they would win if their bowlers could take early wickets.
- have practised (present perfect) became had practised (past perfect).
- will win became would win; can take became could take.
- Every verb in the speech is shifted, not only the first one.
When the tense does not changeOften examined
Back-shift is the normal rule, but in the cases below the tense of the reported speech stays as it is. These are favourite MCQs because the tempting option is the shifted one.
| Case | Direct | Indirect |
|---|---|---|
| 1. The reporting verb is present or future (says, is saying, has said, will say) | Ali says, "I am busy." | Ali says that he is busy. |
| 2. A universal truth or scientific fact | The teacher said, "Water boils at 100 degrees Celsius." | The teacher said that water boils at 100 degrees Celsius. |
| 3. A habitual fact or something still true (a proverb, a habit, a permanent state) | He said, "Honesty is the best policy." | He said that honesty is the best policy. |
| 4. A historical fact (past simple stays past simple) | The teacher said, "Pakistan came into being in 1947." | The teacher said that Pakistan came into being in 1947. |
| 5. An unreal condition or wish (if I were, would that, I wish) | He said, "If I were rich, I would build a school." | He said that if he were rich, he would build a school. |
| 6. Modals that have no past form (could, would, should, might, ought to, used to, had better) | She said, "I would help you." | She said that she would help me. |
Indirect: The geography teacher said that the Indus is the longest river of Pakistan and it flows into the Arabian Sea.
- Both verbs state permanent geographical facts, so is and flows are kept in the present.
Changing the pronouns: the SON ruleOften examined
Pronouns change because the reporter is not the speaker. The easy way to remember the rule is the word SON:
| Letter | Person in the reported speech | Changes according to | Example |
|---|---|---|---|
| S | First person (I, me, my, mine, myself, we, us, our, ours) | the Subject of the reporting verb (the speaker) | Ali said, "I am late." : Ali said that he was late. |
| O | Second person (you, your, yours, yourself, yourselves) | the Object of the reporting verb (the listener) | Ali said to me, "You are late." : Ali told me that I was late. |
| N | Third person (he, she, it, they, him, her, them, his, their) | Not changed | Ali said, "She is late." : Ali said that she was late. |
| Direct | Speaker or listener is a man | Speaker or listener is a woman | Speaker or listener is the reporter (I) |
|---|---|---|---|
| I / me | he / him | she / her | I / me |
| my / mine | his / his | her / hers | my / mine |
| myself | himself | herself | myself |
| we / us | they / them | they / them | we / us |
| our / ours / ourselves | their / theirs / themselves | their / theirs / themselves | our / ours / ourselves |
| you (to one person) | he / him | she / her | I / me |
| your / yours / yourself | his / his / himself | her / hers / herself | my / mine / myself |
| you (to a group), yourselves | they / them, themselves | they / them, themselves | we / us, ourselves |
Worked cases
Zara said that she had lost her purse.
- I and my follow the subject Zara, so they become she and her.
The teacher told Umar that he had done his work well.
- You and your follow the object Umar, so they become he and his.
I told him that I would meet him at the station.
- The subject is I, so I stays I.
- The object is him, so you becomes him.
He advised me to take my umbrella.
- Your follows the object me, so it becomes my.
- You should (advice to the listener) is reported with advised + listener + to, so the you disappears into the pattern.
Asma told me that my brother had met them at the airport.
- Your follows the object me, so it becomes my.
- Them is third person, so it does not change.
The captain told his players that they must not lose their nerve.
- We and our include the captain and his players, so they become they and their.
- must not (prohibition) is kept.
He told me that I was right. (or: He told her / them that she / they were right)
- When the object is missing, supply one that fits the story; me is used when you are the listener.
Nasir complained that Munir had not attended his birthday party.
- He had not attended his party would be unclear, because he and his could both mean Nasir.
- Use the name once to remove the confusion; this is allowed and is good style.
Changing words of time and placeOften examined
Words that show nearness in time or place are changed to words that show distance, because the reporting happens later and somewhere else.
| Direct | Indirect |
|---|---|
| now | then |
| today | that day |
| tonight | that night |
| tomorrow | the next day / the following day |
| yesterday | the day before / the previous day |
| the day after tomorrow | in two days' time / two days later |
| the day before yesterday | two days before |
| ago | before |
| just | then |
| this | that |
| these | those |
| here | there |
| hence | thence |
| thus | so |
| last night | the previous night / the night before |
| last week (month, year) | the previous week / the week before |
| next week (month, year) | the following week / the next week |
| this morning (evening, week) | that morning (evening, week) |
| come | go (when the place is not where the reporter is) |
Indirect: Faiza said that she had arrived there two days before and she would leave the following week.
- here became there; ago became before; next week became the following week.
Assertive sentences (statements)Often examined
An assertive sentence makes a statement: it tells something, positive or negative. It is the easiest type and the base for all the others.
- Reporting verb: said stays said; said to becomes told. Use a tone verb when the speech shows one (replied, complained, promised, informed, assured, admitted).
- Linking word: that.
- Change pronouns (SON), tense (back-shift) and time and place words.
- Word order stays the same as in the direct speech: subject + verb.
Ahmed said that he was preparing for the entry test.
The shopkeeper told me that he had no change then.
She promised her father that she would not waste money on junk food.
- I will not ... to a parent is a promise, so promised is a better verb than told.
The student denied that he had copied from anyone.
- did not copy (past simple, negative) became had not copied.
- denied suits a speech that rejects a charge.
I asked him if he had seen the match. He replied in the affirmative (or: He replied that he had).
- Yes becomes replied in the affirmative; No becomes replied in the negative.
- A short answer can also be expanded: He replied that he had (seen it).
Interrogative sentences (questions)Often examined
A question in direct speech becomes a statement in indirect speech. It is still a report of a question, but the reported part is no longer a question, so its word order and punctuation change.
- Reporting verb: said / said to becomes asked, enquired, wanted to know, or wondered.
- Linking word: if or whether for yes/no questions (those that begin with is, are, am, was, do, does, did, has, have, can, will, shall, may, should, could). The wh-word itself for wh- questions (who, what, when, where, why, how, which, whose, whom).
- Word order: change the question order (verb before subject) to statement order (subject before verb). Remove do, does and did and put the main verb in the right past form.
- Change pronouns, tense and time and place words as usual.
- End with a full stop. The question mark is removed.
| Direct question | Indirect (statement order) |
|---|---|
| "Are you ready?" | if I was ready |
| "Do you like cricket?" | if I liked cricket (do is removed) |
| "Did she call?" | whether she had called (did is removed; call becomes had called) |
| "Where do you live?" | where I lived |
| "Why is he crying?" | why he was crying |
| "Who broke the window?" | who had broken the window (who is the subject, so the order is already a statement) |
| "Which book have you chosen?" | which book I had chosen |
The teacher asked Ali if he had finished his project.
My mother asked me what I was doing in the kitchen.
- are you doing became I was doing: subject first, then the verb.
The stranger asked me how far Rawalpindi was from there. I replied that it was about 15 kilometres.
He politely asked the clerk if he could tell him when the office opened.
- could has no past form, so it stays.
- A polite request in question form may also be reported as a request: He requested the clerk to tell him when the office opened.
The boy asked his teacher whether he should clean the board. (or: The boy offered to clean the board.)
- Shall I asking for advice or offering becomes should, or the offer is reported with offered to.
Imperative sentences (orders, requests, advice, prohibition)Often examined
An imperative sentence gives an order, makes a request, offers advice or forbids something. The subject you is hidden: (You) Sit down. In indirect speech the verb becomes an infinitive: to sit down.
- Reporting verb by tone: ordered or commanded (order), requested (please, kindly), begged or implored (humble request), advised (advice), urged, warned, forbade (prohibition), told (neutral).
- Put the listener after the reporting verb: ordered the servant, advised me. If no listener is named, supply a suitable one.
- Linking word: to + first form of the verb. For a negative order (Do not, Don't, Never): not to, never to, or use forbade + listener + to.
- Remove please and kindly (the verb requested already shows politeness). Remove the vocative (Sir, boys, Ali) and use it as the listener.
- Change pronouns and time and place words as usual. The infinitive has no tense, so there is no back-shift of the main verb.
The officer ordered the soldiers to march forward.
Aliya requested her brother to lend her his notes.
- please is dropped; requested shows it.
- me follows the speaker Aliya (her); your follows the listener, her brother (his).
The doctor advised the patient to avoid fried food and to walk daily.
The teacher forbade the students to use their mobile phones in the class. (or: The teacher told the students not to use their mobile phones in the class.)
- Do not becomes not to. With forbade, the not is dropped because forbade already means told not to.
The poor man respectfully begged the rich man to have pity on him.
- Sir (a vocative of respect) becomes respectfully.
The coach ordered the boys to run five rounds of the ground.
- The vocative boys becomes the listener.
Mother warned me to be careful while crossing the road.
Exclamatory sentencesOften examined
An exclamatory sentence shows a strong feeling: joy, sorrow, surprise, wonder, anger. It often begins with an interjection (Hurrah, Alas, Oh, Wow, Bravo) or with What a ... ! or How ... !
- Reporting verb: exclaimed with the feeling shown: exclaimed with joy, with sorrow, with surprise, with wonder, with regret, with anger. cried out may also be used.
- Remove the interjection and the exclamation mark; the feeling is now in the reporting verb.
- Linking word: that.
- Change What a / How into a plain statement using very, great or a big: What a fine shot! becomes that it was a very fine shot.
- Change pronouns, tense and time and place words as usual.
| Interjection or phrase | Feeling | Indirect verb |
|---|---|---|
| Hurrah! Hurray! | joy | exclaimed with joy |
| Alas! Ah! Oh (sad) | sorrow | exclaimed with sorrow / regret |
| Oh! Wow! What! | surprise, wonder | exclaimed with surprise / wonder |
| Bravo! Well done! | praise | applauded / praised + listener |
| Fie! Shame! | disgust | exclaimed with disgust |
| Thank you! | gratitude | thanked + listener |
| Congratulations! | joy for another | congratulated + listener + on |
| Good morning / Good evening | greeting | wished / greeted + listener + good morning |
| Goodbye / Good night | farewell | bade + listener + goodbye / good night |
| Sorry! | regret | apologized (to + listener) |
The students exclaimed with joy that their team had won the trophy.
The farmer exclaimed with sorrow that the flood had destroyed his crop.
The tourist exclaimed with wonder that Hunza was a very beautiful valley.
- What a beautiful valley became a very beautiful valley, placed in statement order.
She exclaimed that it was very hot that day.
The principal applauded Ayesha, saying that she had topped the board.
Hamza respectfully wished his teacher good morning.
Optative sentences (wishes and prayers)
An optative sentence expresses a wish, a prayer or a curse. It usually begins with May or with Would that, and ends with an exclamation mark.
- Reporting verb: prayed (a prayer, often with Allah or God), wished (a wish), blessed, cursed.
- Linking word: that.
- May becomes might. Would that / I wish + were stays (it is an unreal wish).
- Change pronouns and time and place words; end with a full stop.
The mother prayed that her son might live long.
The old man prayed that Allah might bless me. (or: The old man blessed me.)
The boy wished that he were a pilot.
- were is kept because the wish is unreal; would that is replaced by wished.
My friends wished me good luck for my exams.
He bade us goodbye. (or: He bade his friends goodbye.)
Sentences with LetOften examined
Sentences beginning with Let look like orders, but they have different meanings. Find the meaning first; the conversion depends on it.
| Meaning | Signal | Reporting verb + pattern | Direct | Indirect |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Proposal or suggestion | Let us / Let's (the speaker and the listeners do something together) | proposed / suggested (to + listener) that ... should | He said to his friends, "Let us go to the park." | He proposed to his friends that they should go to the park. |
| Negative proposal | Let us not | proposed that ... should not | She said, "Let us not waste time." | She proposed that they should not waste time. |
| Permission | Let me / Let him / Let her (asking to be allowed) | requested / asked + listener + to let / to allow | The boy said to the teacher, "Let me go home." | The boy requested the teacher to let him go home. |
| Offer | Let me + help (the speaker offers to do something for the listener) | offered to | Nasir said, "Let me show you the photographs." | Nasir offered to show him the photographs. |
| Order about a third person | Let him / Let them + passive or order | ordered / said that ... should | The judge said, "Let the prisoner be released." | The judge ordered that the prisoner should be released. |
| Condition or indifference | Let it (rain / happen) | said that ... might / did not mind if | He said, "Let it rain. I will go." | He said that it might rain but he would go. (or: He said that he did not mind if it rained and he would go.) |
Mixed sentences (more than one type in one speech)Often examined
A single speech often has two or more sentence types: a statement and a question, an exclamation and an order. Each part is converted by its own rule, with its own reporting verb and linking word, and the parts are joined together.
- Divide the speech into its sentences and name the type of each (statement, question, order, exclamation, wish).
- Choose a reporting verb and a linking word for each part.
- Join the parts with and, and added that, but, as (for a reason), and then asked, and further said that.
- Change pronouns, tense and time and place words in every part.
| Joining phrase | Use it when | Example |
|---|---|---|
| and added that | a second statement follows a statement | He said that he was tired and added that he would rest. |
| and asked (if / wh-) | a question follows a statement | She told me that she was hungry and asked if lunch was ready. |
| and told / ordered + to | an order follows a statement | He said that it was late and told us to hurry. |
| as / because | the second part gives a reason | The teacher ordered the boys to keep quiet as the principal was coming. |
| but | the parts contrast | She exclaimed that it was amazing but they had missed him. |
| further said that / went on to say that | the same speaker continues | He further said that he would go to Murree for a week. |
Ali told me that he was going to the bazaar and asked me if I needed anything.
The teacher told the boys not to make a noise as the principal was taking a meeting.
The old man exclaimed with gratitude that the young doctor had saved his life, and prayed that Allah might reward him.
The clerk respectfully replied to the manager that he had finished the report. The manager told him to put it on his table.
- Yes, sir is expressed by respectfully replied.
- The manager's order becomes told him to put it on his table.
Conversations and dialogues (FBISE Q.5 c)Often examined
In the paper you get a short conversation between two people and must write it as one paragraph in indirect speech. It is the mixed sentence rule applied to several speakers. Examiners look for correct changes and a smooth, varied paragraph.
- Read the whole conversation first. Mark each speaker and who is spoken to. The same he or she may refer to two different people; decide now where to use names.
- Number each speech and name its type and tone: complaint, apology, question, offer, invitation, refusal, agreement.
- Write one indirect sentence (or two) for each speech, with a different reporting verb where the tone allows: complained, apologized, enquired, replied, offered, suggested, agreed, promised, thanked.
- Join the speeches naturally: He replied that ..., She further said that ..., and added that ..., Then he asked ..., On this, ... .
- Use a name instead of a pronoun whenever he, his or him could point to both speakers.
- Check back-shift, pronouns and time words in every line. Remove every inverted comma, question mark and exclamation mark.
| Situation in the dialogue | Useful indirect opening |
|---|---|
| Second speaker answers | He replied that ... / She answered that ... |
| Same speaker continues | He further said that ... / He added that ... / He went on to say that ... |
| Question after a statement | Then he asked her whether ... / He also enquired ... |
| Sorry | He apologized, saying that ... / He apologized to her for ... |
| Thank you | She thanked him and said that ... |
| Let us | He proposed that they should ... |
| Let me (help) | She offered to ... |
| Yes / No | He replied in the affirmative / negative. |
| Sir / Madam | He respectfully ... |
| Oh! / Hurrah! / Alas! | She exclaimed with surprise / joy / sorrow that ... |
Hina asked Saad why he had not come to college the day before. Saad replied that he had been ill and added that he had had a high fever. Hina said that she was sorry to hear that and offered to give him her notes. Saad thanked her very much.
- Question: said to became asked; why didn't you come became why he had not come; yesterday became the day before.
- Answer: replied that; was became had been; the second statement joined with and added that; had (past simple) became had had.
- Sympathy: said that she was sorry; Let me give became offered to give (an offer).
- Thank you: thanked her.
- Four different reporting verbs (asked, replied, offered, thanked) show the tone of each line.
Changing indirect speech into direct speech
Sometimes you are asked to do the reverse: rebuild the speaker's exact words from a report. Reverse each of the five changes.
- Reporting verb: told becomes said to; asked, ordered, requested, exclaimed and prayed become said or said to. Put a comma after it and open the inverted commas.
- Remove the linking word (that, if, whether, to).
- Pronouns: the subject of the reporting verb becomes I (or we); the listener becomes you.
- Tense: move each verb one step forward (was to is, had gone to has gone or went, would to will, could to can, might to may).
- Time and place: then to now, that day to today, there to here, the next day to tomorrow, the day before to yesterday.
- Rebuild the type: a question gets question order and a question mark; an order starts with the verb (add please for requested); an exclamation gets an interjection (Hurrah, Alas) and an exclamation mark; a wish gets May ... !
- Start the speech with a capital letter and close the inverted commas after the end mark.
Omar said to me, "I lost my watch yesterday."
- had lost became lost (past simple) because of yesterday; the day before became yesterday.
The teacher said to me, "Have you done your homework?"
She said to her brother, "Please drop me at the college."
He said, "Alas! I have missed the train."
The old woman said to me, "May you live long!"
Bilal said to his friends, "Let us go for a picnic."
Common errors: a final checklist
These are the mistakes examiners see most. Check your answer against the table before you hand it in.
| Wrong | Right | Rule |
|---|---|---|
| He told that he was ill. | He told me that he was ill. | told needs a listener |
| He said me that he was ill. | He said to me / He told me that he was ill. | said cannot take a listener directly |
| She asked me where was I going. | She asked me where I was going. | statement order in indirect questions |
| He asked me that if I was ready. | He asked me if I was ready. | one linking word only |
| She asked me did I like tea. | She asked me if I liked tea. | if / whether for yes/no questions; do / did removed |
| He asked me where I lived? | He asked me where I lived. | no question mark in indirect speech |
| The teacher said that the earth moved round the sun. | The teacher said that the earth moves round the sun. | universal truths keep the present tense |
| He said that he will come tomorrow. | He said that he would come the next day. | will becomes would; tomorrow becomes the next day |
| Mother forbade me not to go. | Mother forbade me to go. / Mother told me not to go. | forbade already contains not |
| He suggested me to see a doctor. | He suggested that I should see a doctor. | suggest takes that + should |
| He offered me to help. | He offered to help me. | offer takes to + verb |
| She exclaimed with joy that hurrah she had passed. | She exclaimed with joy that she had passed. | interjections are removed |
| She prayed that God may bless me. | She prayed that God might bless me. | may becomes might |
| He said that he had went home. | He said that he had gone home. | had + third form of the verb |
Key terms
- Narration
- Reporting the words of a speaker in direct or indirect form.
- Direct speech
- The exact words of a speaker, written inside inverted commas.
- Indirect speech (reported speech)
- The meaning of a speaker's words reported in the reporter's own words, without inverted commas.
- Reporting verb
- The verb that introduces the speech: said, told, asked, ordered, exclaimed.
- Reporting clause
- The speaker, the reporting verb and the listener: Sana said to her mother.
- Reported speech
- The words inside the inverted commas in direct speech.
- Inverted commas
- Quotation marks (" " or ' ') that enclose the exact words of a speaker.
- Listener (object of the reporting verb)
- The person spoken to; second-person pronouns change to agree with it.
- Linking word
- The word that joins the reporting clause to the reported speech: that, if, whether, a wh-word, to, not to.
- Back-shift
- Moving each verb of the reported speech one step into the past when the reporting verb is past: is to was, has to had, will to would.
- SON rule
- First person follows the Subject of the reporting verb, second person follows the Object, third person is Not changed.
- Universal truth
- A fact that is always true (the sun rises in the east); its present tense is kept in indirect speech.
- Historical fact
- A fixed event of history; its past simple is usually kept in indirect speech.
- Tone
- The feeling or purpose behind the words (request, complaint, advice, joy), shown in indirect speech by the reporting verb.
- Assertive sentence
- A statement; reported with said / told + that.
- Interrogative sentence
- A question; reported with asked + if / whether or a wh-word, in statement order and without a question mark.
- Yes/no question
- A question that begins with a helping verb (is, do, can, have) and can be answered yes or no; linked by if or whether.
- Wh- question
- A question that begins with who, what, when, where, why, which, whose or how; linked by the wh-word itself.
- Imperative sentence
- An order, request, advice or prohibition; reported with a tone verb + listener + to or not to.
- Exclamatory sentence
- A sentence showing strong feeling; reported with exclaimed with joy / sorrow / surprise + that.
- Optative sentence
- A wish or prayer (May ...!); reported with wished or prayed + that, and may becomes might.
- Let sentence
- A sentence starting with Let; reported as a proposal (proposed that ... should), a request for permission (requested ... to let) or an offer (offered to).
- Interjection
- A word showing sudden feeling (Hurrah, Alas, Oh, Bravo); removed in indirect speech.
- Vocative
- A name or title used to address the listener (Sir, boys, Ali); in indirect speech it becomes the listener or an adverb such as respectfully.
- Mixed sentence
- A speech containing more than one sentence type; each part is reported with its own verb and linking word.
- Conversation (dialogue)
- An exchange between speakers; in the exam it is changed into one indirect paragraph with varied reporting verbs.
Practice: 40 sentences changed into indirect speech
Sentences 1 to 8 are assertive, 9 to 16 interrogative, 17 to 24 imperative, 25 to 29 exclamatory, 30 to 32 optative, 33 to 35 Let sentences and 36 to 40 mixed. Cover the answer, write your own, then check each change against the reasons.
He said that he was going to Lahore the next day.
- said stays said (no listener).
- am going became was going; tomorrow became the next day; I became he.
Ayesha told me that she had finished her assignment.
- said to became told.
- have finished became had finished; I and my became she and her (Ayesha).
The teacher said that the earth revolves round the sun.
- A universal truth keeps the present tense.
Ali told his mother that he had lost his wallet in the bazaar the day before.
- lost (past simple) became had lost; yesterday became the day before.
- I and my became he and his.
She promised me that she would help me with my homework.
- I will ... to help someone is a promise, so promised shows the tone (told is also correct).
- will became would; I became she; you and your became me and my (the listener).
The captain said that they could win that match if they played as a team.
- can became could; play became played.
- we became they; this became that.
My father says that honesty is the best policy.
- The reporting verb says is present, so no tense changes; the speech is also a proverb (a lasting truth).
Hamid complained to the manager that he had been waiting there for two hours.
- The tone is a grievance, so complained to suits it.
- have been waiting became had been waiting; here became there.
She asked me if I was coming to the Eid party.
- A yes/no question: asked + if.
- are you coming became I was coming (statement order); you became I (the listener, me).
The teacher asked Bilal why he was late that day.
- A wh- question: the wh-word why links the parts.
- are you became he was; today became that day; no question mark.
He asked me where I lived.
- do is removed and live becomes lived (past simple).
- Statement order: I lived.
Sara asked her friend whether she had watched the cricket match the previous night.
- did is removed; watch became had watched.
- last night became the previous night.
The stranger politely asked the policeman if he could show him the way to Faisal Mosque.
- can became could; statement order he could show.
- me became him (the stranger); you became he (the policeman).
- As it is really a request, The stranger requested the policeman to show him the way to Faisal Mosque is also correct.
The officer asked who had left the door open.
- who is the subject of the question, so the order is already a statement order.
- has left became had left.
Mother asked me if I had taken my medicine.
- Yes/no question: if.
- have you taken became I had taken; your became my.
He asked them whether he should bring the tea then.
- Shall I asking for advice becomes should.
- now became then. He offered to bring the tea is also acceptable if the tone is an offer.
The teacher told the students to open their books at page 20.
- An order: told (or ordered) + listener + to.
- your became their.
He requested the waiter to bring him a glass of water.
- please is removed; requested shows politeness.
- me became him.
The doctor advised the patient to take that medicine twice a day.
- A doctor's instruction for the patient's good is advice.
- this became that.
Father advised me not to waste my time on the mobile phone.
- Don't became not to.
- your became my.
The officer commanded the soldiers to stand in a line.
- A military order: commanded (or ordered).
The beggar begged the man in the name of God to give him something to eat.
- A humble, desperate request: begged.
- For God's sake became in the name of God; me became him.
The guard forbade us to park our car there.
- A prohibition: forbade + listener + to (no not after forbade). The guard told us not to park our car there is also correct.
- your became our; here became there.
She warned her brother to be careful on the Motorway.
- Pointing out a danger: warned + listener + to.
The boys exclaimed with joy that they had won the match.
- Hurrah is removed; exclaimed with joy shows the feeling.
- we became they; have won became had won.
The old man exclaimed with sorrow that he had lost his only son.
- Alas shows sorrow.
- I and my became he and his.
She exclaimed with wonder that the Margalla Hills were a very beautiful sight.
- What a beautiful sight became a very beautiful sight, in statement order.
- are became were.
He exclaimed with admiration that the boy was very clever.
- How clever became very clever, in statement order.
- this boy becomes that boy or, to avoid that that, the boy.
The coach applauded the bowler, saying that he had taken five wickets.
- Well done is praise: applauded (or praised).
- You have taken became he had taken.
The mother prayed that her son might pass with distinction.
- A prayer: prayed that; may became might.
- you became her son (the listener).
He wished that he were a millionaire.
- An unreal wish: wished that; were stays.
The old woman prayed that Allah might bless me.
- may became might; you became me. The old woman blessed me is also correct.
Hina proposed to her friends that they should go to Daman-e-Koh that evening.
- Let us is a proposal: proposed that ... should (suggested is also correct).
- us became they; this evening became that evening.
The prisoner requested the jailer to let him meet his family.
- Let me asks for permission: requested + listener + to let.
- me and my became him and his.
He proposed that they should not quarrel over trifles.
- Let us not is a negative proposal: that ... should not.
He told me that he was tired and asked me if I would drive the car.
- Statement: told me that; question: and asked me if.
- am became was; will became would.
The teacher ordered the boys to keep quiet as the principal was coming.
- The vocative boys becomes the listener.
- The second sentence gives the reason, so as joins it; is coming became was coming.
She thanked me and said that I had been very kind to her.
- Thank you became thanked me.
- You became I (the listener); me became her (the speaker); have been became had been.
The guide told the tourists that the Badshahi Mosque was built by Aurangzeb and warned them not to take pictures inside the prayer hall.
- A historical fact keeps the past simple (had been built is also accepted).
- The order is joined with and warned them not to.
He exclaimed with sorrow that I had failed again and advised me to work hard the next time.
- Exclamation: exclaimed with sorrow that; order for my good: advised me to.
- You have failed became I had failed; next time became the next time.
Practice MCQs
Forty-three new MCQs on every rule of narration. Each reason names the rule.
- Areporting clauseAnswer
- Breported speech
- Cinverted commas
- Dlinking word
The speaker and the reporting verb together make the reporting clause; the words inside the inverted commas are the reported speech.
- AShe told me that I was tired.
- BShe said me that she was tired.
- CShe told me that she was tired.Answer
- DShe told to me that she is tired.
said to becomes told + listener; I follows the speaker (she); am becomes was. "said me" and "told to me" break the patterns of said and told.
- Ahas written
- Bwrote
- Chad wrote
- Dhad writtenAnswer
Present perfect becomes past perfect after a past reporting verb; had needs the third form written.
- Arose
- BrisesAnswer
- Chad risen
- Dwas rising
A universal truth keeps the present tense.
- Athat
- Bif or whetherAnswer
- Cto
- Dthe question word
Yes/no questions take if or whether; wh- questions take the question word; statements take that.
- AShe asked me where was I going.
- BShe told me where I was going.
- CShe asked me that where I was going.
- DShe asked me where I was going.Answer
Indirect questions use statement order (I was going), asked, and no that before the wh-word.
- AHe requested me to help him.Answer
- BHe ordered me to help him.
- CHe requested me that help him.
- DHe said me to help him.
please shows a request, so requested + listener + to + verb; me becomes him.
- AMother told me don't go out in the rain.
- BMother forbade me not to go out in the rain.
- CMother advised me not to go out in the rain.Answer
- DMother advised me to not going out in the rain.
A negative imperative becomes not to + verb. "forbade me not to" is a double negative, because forbade already means told not to.
- AcouldAnswer
- Bwould
- Cmight
- Dcan be
can becomes could after a past reporting verb.
- Amay
- Bwould
- CmightAnswer
- Dcan
may (possibility) becomes might.
- Amust have
- Bshould
- Cwould
- Dhad toAnswer
must showing obligation becomes had to (must is also accepted); must have and should change the meaning.
Note. must is also accepted in indirect speech. had to is the answer usually keyed for obligation.
- Athat day
- Bthe next dayAnswer
- Cthe day before
- Dtomorrow's day
tomorrow becomes the next day or the following day.
- Aback
- BbeforeAnswer
- Cthen
- Dsince
ago becomes before: two years ago becomes two years before.
- Athat day
- Bthe next day
- Cthe following day
- Dthe day beforeAnswer
yesterday becomes the day before or the previous day.
- AthereAnswer
- Bwhere
- Cthat place here
- Dhence
here becomes there because the report is made from a different place.
- AHe exclaimed with joy that he was ruined.
- BHe exclaimed with sorrow that alas he was ruined.
- CHe exclaimed with sorrow that he was ruined.Answer
- DHe said alas that he was ruined.
Alas shows sorrow; the interjection is removed and am becomes was.
- AHe proposed that they should go for a walk.Answer
- BHe proposed them to go for a walk.
- CHe said let us go for a walk.
- DHe ordered that we go for a walk.
Let us is a proposal: proposed that ... should; us becomes they.
- AShe wished that Allah may bless me.
- BShe prayed Allah bless me.
- CShe prayed that Allah might bless me.Answer
- DShe ordered Allah to bless me.
A prayer: prayed that; may becomes might; you becomes me.
- Awill
- Bshall
- Cshould
- DwouldAnswer
will becomes would after a past reporting verb.
- Awas
- BisAnswer
- Chad been
- Dwere
The reporting verb says is in the present tense, so the tense does not change.
- Aexclaimed with sorrow
- Bexclaimed with joyAnswer
- Crequested
- Dprayed
Hurrah shows joy.
- Asubject of the reporting verb
- Breported speech
- Cnothing, because it never changes
- Dobject of the reporting verbAnswer
S: first person follows the subject; O: second person follows the object; N: third person is not changed.
- Aremain unchangedAnswer
- Bchange to first person
- Cchange to second person
- Dchange to the object form
N in SON stands for not changed.
- AShe asked him did he call her.
- BShe asked him that whether he called her.
- CShe asked him if he had called her.Answer
- DShe told him if he had called her.
if for a yes/no question; did is removed and call becomes had called; you becomes he, me becomes her.
- AHe ordered his servant to bring him a glass of water.Answer
- BHe ordered his servant bring me a glass of water.
- CHe told his servant that bring him a glass of water.
- DHe ordered to his servant to bring him a glass of water.
An order: ordered + listener + to + verb; me becomes him.
- Athis time
- Bthat day
- CthenAnswer
- Dat present
now becomes then.
- Athis
- Bthat
- Cthem
- DthoseAnswer
these (near, plural) becomes those (far, plural).
- Awas playing
- Bhad been playingAnswer
- Chas been playing
- Dplayed
Past continuous becomes past perfect continuous.
- Ahas been working
- Bhad been workingAnswer
- Cwas working
- Dhad worked
Present perfect continuous becomes past perfect continuous.
- AHe asked me whether he shall open the window.
- BHe told me that he will open the window.
- CHe asked me that should he open the window.
- DHe asked me whether he should open the window.Answer
Shall I asking for advice becomes should; if/whether links a yes/no question; statement order.
- A"I am ready," said Asma.Answer
- B"I am ready." said Asma.
- C"I am ready" said Asma.
- DI am ready, "said Asma."
When the reporting clause follows a statement, the statement ends with a comma inside the inverted commas.
- AHe said yes.
- BHe replied in the negative.
- CHe replied in the affirmative.Answer
- DHe told yes that he was.
Yes becomes replied in the affirmative; No becomes replied in the negative.
- AHe exclaimed that it was a very lovely day.Answer
- BHe exclaimed that what a lovely day it was.
- CHe exclaimed what a lovely day is it.
- DHe said what a lovely day it is.
What a is removed and the exclamation becomes a statement with very: it was a very lovely day.
- AHe said to me, "Did you know him?"
- BHe said, "Do I know you?"
- CHe said to me, "Do you know me?"Answer
- DHe said to me, "Do you know him?"
Reverse the changes: knew becomes do ... know; I (the listener) becomes you; him (the speaker) becomes me.
- AShe told me that she met your brother yesterday.
- BShe told me that she had met my brother yesterday.
- CShe told me that I had met her brother the day before.
- DShe told me that she had met my brother the day before.Answer
met becomes had met; your becomes my (the listener is me); yesterday becomes the day before.
- AThe captain ordered the boys well done.
- BThe captain applauded the boys.Answer
- CThe captain exclaimed with sorrow that the boys had done well.
- DThe captain told well done to the boys.
Well done is praise, reported with applauded (or praised) + listener.
- AHe denied to sign that paper.
- BHe refused to sign that paper.Answer
- CHe refused signing this paper.
- DHe forbade to sign that paper.
Saying no to doing something is reported with refused to + verb; this becomes that. deny takes that or -ing, not to.
- Ahad died
- Bdies
- Chas died
- DdiedAnswer
A historical fact keeps the past simple.
Note. Some teachers also accept had died, because the normal rule back-shifts the past simple. Examiners usually key died, because the death of the Quaid-e-Azam is a fixed historical fact.
- Athe previous nightAnswer
- Bthat night
- Cthe next night
- Dlast night
last night becomes the previous night or the night before.
- AHe ordered me to consult a doctor.
- BHe advised me that I have better consult a doctor.
- CHe advised me to consult a doctor.Answer
- DHe requested me consult a doctor.
had better gives advice: advised + listener + to.
- AHe said that if he were rich, he would buy a car.Answer
- BHe said that if he had been rich, he would have bought a car.
- CHe said that if he was rich he will buy a car.
- DHe said that if I were rich, I would buy a car.
An unreal (second) conditional keeps its tenses in indirect speech; only the pronouns change.
- Athat week
- Bthe previous week
- Cthe following weekAnswer
- Dlast week
next week becomes the following week.
- Ato
- Bfrom
- Cwith
- DofAnswer
enquire takes of before the person asked: enquired of me. asked me needs no preposition.
Paper-style conversations solved
Four conversations in the style of FBISE Q.5 (c), 5 marks each. Each answer is one paragraph; the table shows why every change was made.
The teacher asked Ahmad why he was late. Ahmad respectfully apologized, saying that he had missed the bus. The teacher advised him to leave home earlier from the next day. Ahmad respectfully promised that he would do so.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "Why are you late, Ahmad?" | asked Ahmad why he was late | wh- question: asked + why + statement order; the vocative Ahmad becomes the listener. |
| "I am sorry, sir. I missed the bus" | respectfully apologized, saying that he had missed the bus | sorry: apologized; sir: respectfully; missed became had missed. |
| "You should leave home earlier from tomorrow" | advised him to leave home earlier from the next day | should gives advice: advised + to; tomorrow became the next day. |
| "I will, sir" | respectfully promised that he would do so | I will is a promise; will became would; do so completes the short answer. |
Sana exclaimed with joy that their exams were over and proposed that they should go to Murree that weekend. Hira exclaimed that it was a wonderful idea, but asked whether her parents would allow her. Sana replied that she would ask them that night.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "Hurrah! Our exams are over" | exclaimed with joy that their exams were over | Hurrah removed; exclaimed with joy; our became their; are became were. |
| "Let's go to Murree this weekend" | proposed that they should go to Murree that weekend | Let us is a proposal: that ... should; this became that. |
| "What a wonderful idea!" | exclaimed that it was a wonderful idea | What a is removed; statement order. |
| "but will your parents allow you?" | but asked whether her parents would allow her | yes/no question: whether; will became would; your and you became her (Sana). |
| "I will ask them tonight" | replied that she would ask them that night | An answer: replied; tonight became that night; them (third person) unchanged. |
The customer complained to the shopkeeper that the phone had stopped working the day before, and added that he had bought it from his shop only a week before. The shopkeeper requested him to show him the receipt. The customer handed it over and asked whether he would replace the phone or return his money. The shopkeeper told him not to worry and assured him that they would replace it that day.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "This phone stopped working yesterday" | complained to the shopkeeper that the phone had stopped working the day before | A grievance: complained; stopped became had stopped; this phone became the phone; yesterday became the day before. |
| "I bought it from your shop only a week ago" | and added that he had bought it from his shop only a week before | Same speaker: and added that; your became his (the shopkeeper's); ago became before. |
| "Please show me the receipt" | requested him to show him the receipt | please: requested + listener + to. |
| "Here it is. Will you replace ...?" | handed it over and asked whether he would replace the phone or return his money | Here it is shows an action, so it is reported as handed it over; a choice question takes whether; will became would. |
| "Don't worry. We will replace it today" | told him not to worry and assured him that they would replace it that day | Don't: not to; a promise that removes worry: assured; we became they; today became that day. |
Note. Using the phone and the shop instead of that phone avoids an unclear that that. In the reply, he and his refer to two men; the paragraph stays clear because each sentence names its subject first.
The doctor asked the patient what was troubling him. The patient replied that he had had a high fever since Monday. The doctor offered to check his temperature. He advised him to take complete rest for three days and not to eat oily food. The patient thanked the doctor and promised that he would follow his advice.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "What is troubling you?" | asked the patient what was troubling him | what is the subject of the question, so the order stays; is became was; you became him. |
| "I have had a high fever since Monday" | replied that he had had a high fever since Monday | An answer: replied; have had became had had; since Monday (a named day) stays. |
| "Let me check your temperature" | offered to check his temperature | Let me doing something for the listener is an offer: offered to. |
| "You must take complete rest ... and do not eat oily food" | advised him to take complete rest for three days and not to eat oily food | A doctor's instruction for the patient's good: advised + to; do not became not to. |
| "Thank you, doctor. I will follow your advice" | thanked the doctor and promised that he would follow his advice | Thank you: thanked; I will: promised; your became his (the doctor's). |
Practice: indirect into direct speech
Rebuild the speaker's exact words. Reverse the five changes and restore the punctuation.
He said to me, "I am very busy today."
- told me became said to me; was became am; that day became today.
She said to me, "Have you seen my new house?"
- asked + whether signals a yes/no question: question order and a question mark.
- had seen became have seen; I became you; her became my.
The teacher said to the students, "Don't make a noise."
- ordered ... not to becomes an imperative that starts with Don't.
He said, "Hurrah! I have won the prize."
- with joy is shown by Hurrah and an exclamation mark; had won became have won.
My mother said to me, "May you succeed in the exam!"
- prayed that ... might becomes May ... ! ; I (the listener) became you.
Asim said to his friends, "Let us play cricket this afternoon."
- proposed that ... should becomes Let us; that afternoon became this afternoon.
The old man said to the boy, "Where do you live?"
- A wh- question gets question order with do; lived became live; he (the boy) became you.
The girl said to her teacher, "Please let me go home. I am feeling unwell."
- requested becomes please + imperative; the reason becomes a separate statement; was feeling became am feeling.
"Where have you been all day?" said the father to his son. "I have been playing cricket with my friends," replied the son. "Your exams are near. You should spend more time on your books," said the father. "I will, father," said the son.
- Each speaker starts a new speech inside inverted commas.
- had been became have been; he (the son, the listener) became you, then I when the son speaks.
- advised him to became You should; promised that he would became I will.
- The question gets question order and a question mark; statements before said end with a comma.
FBISE paper questions
Questions from the FBISE HSSC-II 2026 (1st Annual) papers, the old-syllabus paper and FBISE model papers that belong to this unit, answered the way an examiner expects.
I said that I had been working very hard for the last few months and added that I was feeling very tired then and needed a good rest. He told me that he would go to Murree for a week. Then he asked me whether I would like to come with him.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "I have been working very hard for the last few month." I said | I said that I had been working very hard for the last few months | The reporter is the speaker (I said), so I stays I. Present perfect continuous became past perfect continuous. month is corrected to months. |
| "I am now feeling very tired and need a good rest" | and added that I was feeling very tired then and needed a good rest | The same speaker continues, so and added that. am feeling became was feeling, need became needed, now became then. |
| He continued, "I will go to Murree for a week" | He told me that he would go to Murree for a week | The other speaker now talks to me. I (his own word) became he; will became would. |
| Then he asked me, "would you like to come with me?" | Then he asked me whether I would like to come with him | A yes/no question: asked me whether + statement order. you follows the object me, so it became I; me (the speaker) became him. would has no past form, so it stays; no question mark. |
Note. The paper has three misprints: month for months, the full stop inside the inverted commas before I said, and no closing inverted comma after the last question (also would begins with a small letter). The words He continued could suggest that one person speaks throughout. If a teacher reads the first speech as his (he said), the answer becomes: He said that he had been working very hard for the last few months and added that he was feeling very tired then and needed a good rest. He further said that he would go to Murree for a week. Then he asked me whether I would like to come with him. Some keys also change come to go (go with him); both are accepted.
Nasir complained that Munir had not attended his birthday party. Munir apologized to his friend, saying that he was extremely sorry, and explained that he had had to visit his uncle's house in Karachi. Then he enquired how the program had been. Nasir replied that it had been amazing but all of them had missed him. He then offered to show Munir the photographs.
| Direct words | Indirect form | Why |
|---|---|---|
| "You didn't attend my birthday party." said Nasir | Nasir complained that Munir had not attended his birthday party | The tone is a grievance: complained. didn't attend became had not attended. The name Munir replaces you so that he and his do not both seem to mean Nasir. |
| "I am extremely sorry, friend." Munir replied | Munir apologized to his friend, saying that he was extremely sorry | sorry: apologized; the vocative friend becomes to his friend; am became was. |
| "I had to visit my uncle's house in Karachi." | and explained that he had had to visit his uncle's house in Karachi | The same speaker gives a reason: explained. had to (past) became had had to. my became his. |
| "How was the program?" | Then he enquired how the program had been | A wh- question: enquired + how + statement order; was became had been; no question mark. |
| "It was amazing but all of us missed you," said Nasir | Nasir replied that it had been amazing but all of them had missed him | An answer: replied. was became had been, missed became had missed; us became them; you (Munir) became him. |
| "Let me show you the photographs." | He then offered to show Munir the photographs | Let me doing something for the listener is an offer: offered to + verb. |
Exam focus
- Change a 4 to 6 line conversation into indirect narration (Q.5 c, 5 marks). (short)The fixed narration question of the old-syllabus paper (2026) and the 2024 model paper; may appear in Section C of the new paper.Go to answer
- Choose a reporting verb by tone: complained, apologized, enquired, offered, advised, proposed. (mcq)The official FBISE solution gives marks for tone verbs; an all-said answer loses marks.Go to answer
- Back-shift every tense and modal (will to would, can to could, may to might, must to had to). (mcq)The core rule in both MCQs and the conversation; one missed verb costs a mark.Go to answer
- Keep the tense for universal truths, historical facts, present reporting verbs and unreal conditions. (mcq)A favourite MCQ trap: the back-shifted option looks right but is wrong.Go to answer
- Report yes/no and wh- questions in statement order without a question mark. (mcq)The commonest error in answer sheets (asked where was I going).Go to answer
- Report orders, requests, advice and prohibitions with listener + to / not to. (mcq)Tested with double-negative and missing-listener distractors (forbade me not to, ordered to go).Go to answer
- Change pronouns by the SON rule, using names when he and his become unclear. (short)Two same-gender speakers in FBISE conversations make pronouns the main source of confusion.Go to answer
- Let sentences: proposal, permission or offer. (mcq)The 2024 model paper ended with Let me show you the photographs (an offer).Go to answer
- Time and place words: ago, yesterday, tomorrow, last night, next week, here, now. (mcq)Single-word MCQs with close distractors (that day vs the day before).Go to answer
- 2026 old-syllabus Q.5 (c): the Murree conversation with I said. (short)Shows how pronouns change when the reporter is one of the speakers.Go to answer